tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4531765274219955373.post9153447921002465638..comments2024-02-10T02:11:17.866+05:30Comments on The Cosmic Joke: Return of Jarasandha (and Ravana too)Sachin C. Ketkarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09429849773311198305noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4531765274219955373.post-79416311646835186552010-04-03T18:36:21.649+05:302010-04-03T18:36:21.649+05:30Great work! I found great rhythm and punch in the ...Great work! I found great rhythm and punch in the first verse and the second verse went on to sort of soften up and complete the whole image. The 4th verse is curt and powerful.. Loved this line.."My soul is dual core".. Verse 8 is simply wonderful but I don't know..two lines, "indeed...single organ" and "conversant....planning to write" were kind of weakening the effect for me. Again the first two lines of the 10th verse seem weak and "As he never knew where it was", seem too telling and unnecessary. <br />Just my views with best of intentions and nothing personal :-) The concept is brilliant and so is the execution..what I have pointed out are just very superficial aberrations which if you wish you can totally ignore.anitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13519069953749297963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4531765274219955373.post-80923538496218281532010-03-09T09:12:08.654+05:302010-03-09T09:12:08.654+05:30Excellent post.
The artwork by Deepak Shinde is b...Excellent post. <br />The artwork by Deepak Shinde is beautiful. <br /><br />As regards your poetries, they never lose their overwhelming force. And I loved the unique metaphors and the corresponding style; <br /><br />I was bowled over by vi & ix completely. Very minute observation therein.<br /><br />Hope to read many more such razor sharp poetries in future too. Keep up the good work. <br /><br />Best wishes.<br /><br />**Is the English translation published yet? If yes, let me know, where from it is available?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com